UFS 211: THE NARRATIVE PARAGRAPH "PARAGRAPH WRITING"

Topic	The food that I like
Topic Sentences	Cheesecake is my favorite food.
Supporting Details	a)      My favorite desserts that made in fresh cheese. b)      It maybe can be classified as unhealthy. c)       Cheesecakes nutrition’s.
Conclusion	Cheesecake is a delicious dessert I ever tasted.
Linkers/Sequence Connectors used	However, moreover, therefore

Paragraph:

                My favorite food is cheesecake. Cheesecake is the most favorite desserts I ever tasted and almost every day I’m going to bakery and buy a slice of cheesecake. Cheesecake is the most delicious desserts that been suggest by many people. Cheesecake usually been added with strawberry, chocolates, lemon and lots of fruits was added while making a cheesecake. However, it made in a fresh cheese. Sometimes, cheesecakes sweetened with sugar and may be flavored or top with fruits. This food may be contained unhealthy food because it contains of 20g of fats, 45mg cholesterol, 260 of calories, and 8mg of saturated fat. Moreover, it contains 4g of protein, and 20g of carbohydrates. Therefore, cheesecakes are a favorite food for everyone; the most important thing is, when we eating the cheesecake, we can taste the real cheese inside it.

Topic	Plagiarism among college students.
Topic Sentences	A rising tactics among students college.
Supporting Details	a)      Always been used by some students to cheat and some of them want to get a higher marked. b)      Laziness to think and make their own decision while doing their assignment. c)       Hard to find the right point.
Conclusion	Plagiarism is not allowed because it will teach you how to cheat.
Linkers/Sequence Connectors used	However, sometimes

Paragraph:

                Plagiarism among college students is getting higher. This situation happened when a student cannot make their own assignment that been given by their lecturer. However, this short cut work always been using with almost students in college. Sometimes, among students using plagiarism to cheat and want to get higher marks for their assignments. If these students keep continuing using a plagiarism in their whole life, their laziness will become lazier than ever. Moreover, some students are kindly confused to make decision their assignment. Some of them afraid to find the wrong point while searching info from internet, to avoid it happened; they just copy and paste all the points from internet and any sources. They also having a problem to find the right points and that make them using plagiarism. However, plagiarism is not allowed among us because it will teach us to cheat.